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The spoils of war has lain its rest Sucked out of life in a fluster Then stood sets of coffin their size No one looked close to the grave The ship has sailed Oh how blessed they are that has part Rest assured my lovely soldiers Hey guys :) I created this war-inspired poem last year for our Literature teacher asked me to do so. Hahahahaha hope liked it :)
Leaving their child in its own nest
Hopes that once lit their mind’s now gone
To a void that Satan has done
They took their blood out of err
Drew their blood out and intestines
Embalmed and dressed, as if predestined
Welcoming forth as their own Christ
As stiff as stone, they then slept
No remorse and no regrets
Hall echoed cries of regrets
The tensed mourners are all wary
Singing the dead’s last Kyrie
For distant gunshots and bombs ring
Louder than people’s weeping
To a journey to afterlife
They rest easy, thinking no strife
In the rubble that was once their home
Away from this world that breaks heart
Where guns are flowers in folk’s eyes
Where wounded children often cries
You’re suffering will be in vain
For people never learn how to care
‘Cause hatred for each fellow flares
Upvoted. I like it!
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Thank you kabayan :D
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Maka inspire dude hahaha himo sad ko poem
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char hahahah thank you papa g
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upvoted. i love it👌
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Thank you :D
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Its amazing dude :) job well done
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Thank you dude
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Very nice poem.
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Thank you :D Followed you
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Ok brother will follow you. Please follow in return, im also quite new.
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Wow! This is really good! I love history although this made me sad to think of all the souls lost to war and families destroyed. Specially if it hits home like what happned here in marawi. :( i met a few people from marawi and heard their stories very sad all that they worked for is gone... and they are left with ruins...
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Yea it was very depressing. Knowing that our kababayans are being subjected to war that doesn't involve them is very heartbreaking. The peaceful life that they've lived were taken from them forcefully, and now they are being subjected to bigger problem - muslim discrimination by our fellow Filipino. It's very sad.
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The poem is best sung with the tune of My Chemical Romance's Disenchanted. Hahhah You know it @ajpaul.
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Hahahahahaha jakeeeeeeeeee
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