Stand bare and look me in the eye. Tell me all your secrets leave nothing behind.

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Keep that beautiful body, far away from me,
Its a dessert, for the end.

Instead, show me your world within,
Let me feel your soul.

Hide no pain fake no happiness,
Show me what you really feel.

Who are you when the clock hits 3?
Tell me who you are when the mask falls off;

Show me whats beneath that pale skin
Don't distract me with your beautiful smiles,
Tell me who you really are.

Let me take a peek within.
Show me what you are really made of,
Even if its just darkness within.

Show me your quenching soul,buried within
I shall promise to stay beside,
For all of time, for the better or for the worse.

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I am a photographer, I blog about my travel/art life alongside what you see. If you pay a lil visit visit to my blog @awakeningartist , You will see that I love nothing more than revealing the Truth. I love depth in each subject so I study them all.
Thanks a lot for reading :) have a great day :)

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your poetry really very wonderfull.this time i read your poetry.i am really enjoyed it. your creativity very super of poetry.thank u sharing for your good poetry. @awakeningartist

I am so happy to get such nice support from you all and I am glad that you liked it :) make sure you follow for more :)

your posts are golden.
yeah.. i think writing might have its advantes as well as thanks for sharing...

Thank you so much :)

This has a beautiful sentiment and charming flow. Ultimately we are all mere vibrational quality which resonates between souls. This has a good resonance and took me to a world of wordplay. Thank you.

"Resonate between souls" beautiful way to put it. Thanks a lot mate :)

Thumbs up dear. this is really heart touching poetry. these kinds of words will give you insane​ feelings. keep it up dear.

I am glad that you felt the vibe :)

You are welcome dear <3

Awesome

Thanks

Very beautiful poetry. I want my friend @steemseph to see too! Thank you for sharing. Love your work. Followed and resteemed.

Thank you so much :)

Beautiful!

thanks!!

Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing your story. Kudos. Please upvote me.

Thanks a lot for appreciating but please don't not comment asking for upvotes. Its a spam according to the rules of steemit and you will never increase your rep of you ask someone else. Just saying!

Que hermosa

gracias :D

This is super

Thanks

The more I am reading your blogs, the more I want to read. Poems, nature, art are life perfectly blended by you!
Thumbs up !! :D

Glad you liked them. Thank you for reading :D you are a friend of aishwarya right?

You might like this one, it is about a recent discovery.

https://steemit.com/life/@awakeningartist/6vbwf2-where-do-you-think-it-all-began-who-says-our-history-is-right

You on steemit.chat?

yeah.. let me read this one too and yeah aishwarya is a great friend :D
I am on steemchat :) )

Hey, Dear! You seem very creative! :) Great to have you here. Looking forward to your adventures!

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Thanks a lot! I'll definitely check it out!

A good friend's poem is perfect for the encouragement of people who are in trouble

Thanks a lot Very true :) make sure you resteem :)

Yes my friends will upvote and resteem

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Hmm alright, son tell me what are you trying to achieve?

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1st thing you have no clue how retarded I am lol. 2nd stop calling @onceuponatime a cunt. It was you who started acting cocky he was just commenting on my posts. See don't make me do this, I don't make a pleasant enemy. Unflagging you won't do shit. Just stop this here. I don't wanna waste time on dumb shit. create a new profile and know what to say next time.

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