[Poem - With Recitation] Never-Never Land

in poem •  7 years ago 

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The whip and crack of well-used strap,
Snaps loud and sudden as a slap,
And lands on unprotected limb,
Shocking as a thunderclap.

On tender flesh are burning rays,
Of angry, livid-red whelps raised,
Screaming with the stinging pain,
You know will last for days and days.

How punishing the frenzied blows,
That injure more than outside shows.
The cuts that bleed are not all seen.
Inside the soul the worse wound grows.

Running from that insane hand,
Inside you find a place to stand,
And disappearing in your mind,
You run to Never-Never Land.


Note: I posted this poem some months back, but with the inclusion of the recital I'm hoping the community finds some additional value. Thanks for reading and perhaps listening.
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sounds bdsm

Ah! That never occurred to me, but I guess I can see why you might interpret it that way. My intent was to compress into a few words the experience of a child, abusively beaten by a crazed parent. Thanks for checking it out.

some time words works like magic more then other. I waiting to read your love poem, full touch of love..

I think I can see why you might see this as one of the other times. With this poem I wanted to move in a different, perhaps opposite direction. Thanks for your comment.

awesome

Thanks!

really nice poem!

I appreciate your taking the time to comment. Thanks!