I'd like to see how some people would respond to the line,"I grabbed her and threw her against the wall."
In today's politically-correct era, some may complain about that line. It doesn't bother me, per se, because as I read the poem, it seemed that this was partially describing an inner struggle.
Two lines that I liked were,
I am an immovable object
She is an unstoppable force
When I read those lines, I asked myself, What happens when an unstoppable force comes in contact with an immovable object?
This is my reflection of life. It could be an inner battle of one soul, my reflection of my own soul. It's not an actual occurrence between two people but it can apply to people who have actually experienced such violence in their lives. I couldn't care less about political correctness when there's so much happening in the world that deserves our attention. We should call a spade a spade.
When these two forces meet... only destruction, death, results!
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