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misty dreams collide
forming space and time
no monstrous noise
chaos yet poise
rummaging around heart deep
solely dream soaked lovers meet
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Interesting...it tells me a story of two lovers who must meet each other on the dream plane for their love is too forbidden to speak of in the waking life.
Probably not what you intended when you wrote it, lol. But that's the mental picture I got from reading it. :P Nice work though, I love how concise all your poems are. Every time I try to write poetry I always end up writing and writing and writing haha
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This is why I love to write poetry. It does not matter my mental image behind these words. What matters is the words making you see something or evoke an emotion. Thanks for reading and for the comment <3
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Indeed, that's why I love poems :D
They're kinda like the tweets of the creative writing world haha.
Short yet still gets the point across!
I always enjoy reading your posts :)
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My poems are often short enough to be tweets! hahaha
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very beautiful work.. I love poetry as well! :) upvoted and followed!
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Thank you!
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My fave part of the poem ❤️
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Thank you! I had help from @negativer and @tinypaleokitchen one that second line <3
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You guys are just great!
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