the birds have returned to their nest
the sound of the ripple starts slowly
the wind held the breath in the ridge
the shadow lovingly feeds the silence
for a moment...
calm controlled the situation
to allow vision to escape into the evening sky
without any sound interruption
so that the soul can return to itself
in a tranquil twilight
I love how you tie the title in at the end. One line that possibly confused me was "calmly controlled the situation." Do you mean;
"Calm... controlled the situation," ???
Curious on your thoughts about that line.
I think you may enjoy my recent poem=)
https://steemit.com/poetry/@sixshot/last-desserts
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You're right .. it's just a mistake .. I'll edit it now. Thank you very much.
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