Struggle To Break Free

in poem •  7 years ago  (edited)

Like a ball tossed around, it moved from side to side, back and forth looking for a balance.
As a tool in the hands, preferably the legs of a player, it's wheeled to whatever direction the player wishes, either through mud or dry grass.

Am i worth it, is my world void?
Can I make it, can I be like him or her?
Am I loved, can I trust? Can I really be great?

All this & more, it rolls about seeking for answers, believing that one day, in an hour, minute, second, it will be relieved of the great burden.
After being kicked, thrown, bounced, tossed, it finally crossed the threshold of suffering, agony, trauma, low self-esteem to the place it yearned for.
Yes! I'm special, talented, gorgeous, brilliant, fabulous, I can't be someone's counterfeit...

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Wow! These words carry great inspiration

Thank you

I love this poem it's very good. Just working on arranging it properly

Okay

Yes You certainly can make it. Anything is possible with God in your corner.

Sure

Nice one bro!

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Nice really inspired please place an upvote back to us

So inspiring

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Nice poem bro. keep it up. The more you share it the more you improve.

Yes! I'm special, talented, gorgeous, brilliant, fabulous, I can't be someone's counterfeit...

You are right!
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Thank You so much i appreciate

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Yes! I'm special, talented, gorgeous, brilliant, fabulous, I can't be someone's counterfeit...

You blew my mind with this. Keep inspiring and motivating us.

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beautiful, think many of us silently feel these things

Yes and some of the times we begin to doubt ourselves

Wonderful! Very powerful words and nicely composed! 😊

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Yes you can make it, all you have to do is to believe in yourself be focused and work hard thats all you need!!!!!

We all struggle with those questions, so this work resonates particularly well. I especially like how you ended it on a positive and determined note - very inspiring. Keep writing!

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very very nice. Profound words!

Thank you

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That be some nice poem, man. It's conclusion especially - powerful conclusion. A lot of inspiration to be found.

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Yes! I'm special, talented, gorgeous, brilliant, fabulous, I can't be someone's counterfeit...

Truly no room for counterfeit, you are who you say you are

Wow this is lovely

Thank you

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Nice... iambic pentameter

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Beautiful poem.
Yes, everybody is worth of love, understanding and success.
Only the effort and intention differs.

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Really inspiring... welldone sir..