RE: Moderate developments

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Moderate developments

in poem •  7 years ago 

Very descriptive language is being used here. I like the line 'Gradually day hands over to top twelve' However, there is not much action in this poem. I still liked the imagery and the way the photo you used matches your words perfectly. Well done, and thank you for sharing!

PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)

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Thank you so much My friend

You're welcome! Keep it up. :)