Very descriptive language is being used here. I like the line 'Gradually day hands over to top twelve' However, there is not much action in this poem. I still liked the imagery and the way the photo you used matches your words perfectly. Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
Thank you so much My friend
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You're welcome! Keep it up. :)
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