I love you heart of water
I am a prisoner of your cascade of smiles.
Your name rains on my skin
Like a flower chain.
Only you suspend my voice in your sighs
And in your soft imaginary time
Rumored a flag of roses.
The transparency of your dreams
Gallop on my path of shadows
I love you heart of water.
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I think you should work on this poem. There are some structural problems, but those last three lines are really strong. This one is worth working on, and you have a great capacity for creating visceral images.
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Thank you I'll take it into account
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