RE: I love you

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I love you

in poem •  7 years ago 

I think you should work on this poem. There are some structural problems, but those last three lines are really strong. This one is worth working on, and you have a great capacity for creating visceral images.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thank you I'll take it into account

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