sands of love

in poem •  7 years ago  (edited)

I want to walk with you
Hand in hand, along the soft sand.
Holding you tightly to me, as we softly caress.
To be into you, and you into me
To a depth neither wants controlled.
Tasting you, inhaling your breath as we kiss,
To love as we never knew.
A love so caring, passionate, tender and true,
As we lay on the soft sand.

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On that very soft sand,
While we lay on it hand in hand.
The sudden roughness of the sea sounds strange,
The waves hitting the shore with more rage.
Trying to tell us something, may be ugly
We need to hear those words, more closely.
A moment is all it takes, world falls apart,
What we thought would never end, right from the start.
Even if our love seems immortal,
Know that some things are inevitable.
So before our weaknesses take over our strengths,
Let's take this to unimaginable lengths.
Save us from all the misery there is out there
Value this moment, while we are still here.

This is beautiful, @zaidi. I loved it!

That was my first time to be honest... glad you liked it! :)

Very evocative poem! Well done!

Nice one, thumbs up 👍

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Nice & tender! I like it!

great post, nightgirl as usual!