Eye wide shut with hand on heart.

in poem •  7 years ago 

Straight from the Captain's journal of the U.S.S. Minnowprize!

Today I think I'll write something a little different for you.

I hope you enjoy.

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Blinking away the dust of sleep.
Clear vision needed to admire.
Her soul it runs deep.
Pure like water.

To spend today of all days with friends and family.
Or to deny all of this just for me.
It's rather exciting.
Better me and better we.

Lift head high proud Kitten.
Enjoy every moment as best you can.
Let the beast within come without.
Rattle that tuna tin.

For nothing can wound like those close to us.
Filled with bile, filled with puss.
Oftentimes I hear a cuss.
So much fuss.

Let that jolly man go home.
Don't try to pick his bones.
If he leaves a present there.
It's just a reflection, of souls bare.

A shiny box, a precious ribbon.
A perfect partner, a shining kitten.
Laying alone in her cot.
Cool wind blowing, never to Rot.

<3




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Wow - great writing

This particular picture is one of my all time favorite ... after seeing the image, I immediately decided that I'll upvote this post but when I gone thru the poem, Man you made me speechless... What a great writing ...voted and great job... Sometimes some out of the box thinking may lead you to a new start...

Thank you for such a thoughtful comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. I didn't think it was one of my greatest but I tried as hard as I could on this one.

Have a great day. <3

Trial and error makes the talent perfect... Happy new year in advance

That's a good poem. Both the rhythm and content are very nice. Resteemed!

Thanks buddy!! I appreciate the comment, the support and the resteem. Much lovess.

Enjoy the upboat. <3

I've really enjoy the poem. Do you write poetry professionally?

No I do not, unless you count writing on Steemit as a profession, in which case YES!. <3

Thanks for taking the time to comment and read over the post. Much love. <3

Its more like a poem

the first line itself sums it all..lovely creation

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

tranquility, delicate soul, romantica, consolation of heart, sparkle deep in trust and sincerity all for good.
poems meaningful and somewhat difficult to understand, but good, hopefully you are successful and can be better for your next work
thank you...By. @aguess

Inspired By You I have also written a poem.You can check it here:
https://steemit.com/poem/@suzayn17/a-poem-for-my-love-3

nice post.

Amazing work. Keep it up

beautifully written, well composed, thoroughly enjoyable, easily interpreted, fun read, the whole nine yards... thanks for sharing this different and unique piece

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