RE: Tranquil twilight

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Tranquil twilight

in poem •  7 years ago 

I love how you tie the title in at the end. One line that possibly confused me was "calmly controlled the situation." Do you mean;

"Calm... controlled the situation," ???
Curious on your thoughts about that line.

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https://steemit.com/poetry/@sixshot/last-desserts

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You're right .. it's just a mistake .. I'll edit it now. Thank you very much.