Swirling~ A Poem

in poem •  6 years ago  (edited)

Swirling

Swirling, swirling, in my head
so many thoughts I thought were dead
swirling, swirling, in my head
mishing, mashing all a bed
thoughts form and dissipate
snap, crackles heard, pop!
swirling, swirling, in my head
no time to think of the dead...
dreams, stories, flying around
nothing sticking for a millisec
sparks fly, journeys begin
swirling, swirling, in my head
left, right, eyes around,
looking at nothing,
while swirling around
tears come and go
believe.
No
swirling, swirling, in my head.
sleep will cure and time will tell
dreams will come and be found
by the little girl inside my head.

~Snook

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Gonna read this tomorrow sis🤗

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      ·  6 years ago 

    you read it wonderfully!!

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        ·  6 years ago 

      I love the flow of the poem and the underlying meaning.

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Thank you so very much!!

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          ·  6 years ago 

        Stay awesome

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            ·  6 years ago 

          I totally get this! Totally. (Did I mention I haven't been sleeping well lately?) LOLOL!

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            ·  6 years ago 

          hmmmmm wonder why :D

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Thanks @snook. You are definitely a talented Poet....for sure :)

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              ·  6 years ago 

            thank you so much :D

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Aw! I can relate to swirling thoughts, for sure. Big hugs, my friend.

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Thank you!! always in need of hugs <3

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                WOOOOORRRRDDDDSSSSS!

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                WHyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                Very clever. I love it. Especially @enginewitty's interpretation. That is what is so great about art; it is left to the interpretation of the appreciator.

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                I so agree with you @sgt-dan on all points hugs

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