My only poem is in English. I wrote it when I was 13 years old.
Love Forever
I go on sky around the love.
I find you like my dream.
I need not grief. Enough.
My heart does not want a tin.
Shame on you! I am lonely.
You are against. Why do you not forgive me?
You were held from me alone, see
Like I got in the pit
I am calamity. I am punishment.
Because I cant feel without you.
I live frome a stone is monument.
That stoped in soul by glue.
My English teacher said that there were many mistakes in it. But I did not alter it. Perhaps you can help me?
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