RE: The Call on High- Original Poetry from The Helm- The U.S.S. MinnowPROSE!

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The Call on High- Original Poetry from The Helm- The U.S.S. MinnowPROSE!

in poem •  6 years ago  (edited)

spare the rod, the child spoils
The same for present, future, past.

what a classic way to end this poem. I especially like how the diction adds to the beauty of the rhythym of the poem despite the overall tone of the poem Weldone @sammosk

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