Unable

in poem •  7 years ago 

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Trapped by your eyes endearment
Melted by the faint sound of your voice
Wanting to be wrapped in your warm embrace
Frozen in the unenlightened
Needing to flee to be imminent
Unable to break these shackles

😊By:Rebecca Roberts
AKA: Tiger is a Rose

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Nicely done!

Thanks!

Your style is certainly beginning to come through :-) This is very good, a sensation of self-awareness.

My style? I have a style?

You do :-)

what style is it?

You rebel against yourself! As if you have set yourself these lines and limits and then push against them. You think you are prepared to accept something but then launch a campaign against those ideals; a bigger wish for better... So it's kind of like a softer sense of bravery, a voice that doesn't push but simply declares. It resonates with those in similar mindsets.. Take this one, it ends with "unable to break these shackles" but we are left with the sense that the fight against those restraints are far from over.

I highly think you understand me a lot better then I understand myself. Just saying. I tend to write what i feel, with out understanding it fully.

Best way to be honest. You can write feelings if you flood yourself with thought. We are what we are! We are always something no matter what. The fun is in revealing that a little at a time; even to ourselves :-)