Look Into My Eyes

in poem •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hello, my Esteemed readers
So I know its been a while since I dropped anything here, that's because I've been working on this and it took so long to deliver cause this actually is my first happy poem(The first poem I've written out of happiness).
I hope you enjoy it

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Babe!!! I know I can be a pest
I know I don't let you rest
But before you leave and plant this goodbye kiss
All I ask is that you grant me this last wish

Look into my eyes

Look into my eyes
For in it is where the truth lies
The secrets to my smiles
See my feelings engraved like the stars in the skies
The one place where my actions are not disguised

Look into my eyes
For your viewing pleasure, I have trapped
The moon, the sun and the stars in my eyes
See the wonders of their shining light, in my eyes all well mapped

Look into my eyes
See the oceans rise
It is for you to Realize
That like the ocean the joy I feel with you never dries

Look into my eyes
See the unsaid words all true, no lies
See!!! so you can believe and feel
And know what I mean when I say I love you my queen

I know I am a pest
Or maybe slightly obsessed
But I do all I do because I love you
And if you look into my eyes

You will see that every letter is true


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      ·  7 years ago 

    The eyes are window to the soul so they say. They are very expressive and can sometimes tell what we truly feel.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Very true, I believe they hold the truth about our emotions... Thank you for reading

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Baby how far
        You nor reply my own comment
        What's happening ?

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Yeah, I totally agree with you

          They are very expressive and can sometimes tell what we truly feel.

          Nice line

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              ·  7 years ago 

            @samiwhyte, so you are now an homosexual abi...... Well done!!!

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                ·  7 years ago 

              See me see wahala o @winarobert
              I'm just flowing with this amazing poem

              @samiwhyte, so you are now an homosexual abi...... Well done!!!

              Abeg o
              Put me down o
              I don't want to look into yea eyes again
              Na mistake i take type am

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                It had better be ooo😁

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Yes o
                  You nor see joke for my face
                  I like joke well well o

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Its a beautiful poem fahm, I can feel your emotions in every word. Whoever she is that inspired this post better see this oh.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      I'll make sure of that 😁

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Thank God you spoke the truth
                        We know where is inspiration is from

                        Its a beautiful poem fahm, I can feel your emotions in every word. Whoever she is that inspired this post better see this oh.

                        She saw it before it was posted
                        I trust my nigga

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Bro......she definitely did..... Trust me...

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            😂😂😂😂

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Hahahahahahahahahahahaha

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Raw and expressed aptly.
                                Great job @winarobert

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  Thank you @gidionline, I'm glad you like it.

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Lovely poem. Lol in my last poem I said "don't look into the eyes all you see is beauty in disguise"

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      A different emotion gives a different inspiration... I Checked out that poem. Yes looks can be deceiving, but the eyes hold the truth...

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        Very well said

                                        A different emotion gives a different inspiration... I Checked out that poem. Yes looks can be deceiving, but the eyes hold the truth...

                                        I agree with you here,one hundred percent

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          That's the beauty o tapping into the mind

                                          Lovely poem. Lol in my last poem I said "don't look into the eyes all you see is beauty in disguise"

                                          we can have different or opposite views and still make lots of sense

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            Truly beautiful

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              Yeah man
                                              Thanks for your active response
                                              How you dey ?

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                Winarobert! Our poet
                                                Good work bro

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  Thank you boss

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    nor be poet o
                                                    Na engineer
                                                    Please winner tell us who you are

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      Poetic engineer

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        👍👍👍👍 on point

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          This is super cool.. Worth all the time you spent on it..

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            Asin eeehn, this one was hard, but the result is definitely worth it.. Thanks for dropping by

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              For a truth

                                                              Asin eeehn, this one was hard, but the result is definitely worth it..

                                                              You actually spend days
                                                              Just asking o
                                                              no arm ment

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                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                4 days actually

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                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                  I agree sir
                                                                  It really worth the time spent

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                                                                      ·  7 years ago (edited)

                                                                    Awwwww!!!!! This is so beautiful. Well written!!! I loved the fact that it was filled with emotion. This is an awesome poem.

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                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                      Thank you dear, I'm glad you loved it.... I'm blushing 😁😁😁

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                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                        lol
                                                                        blusher, for your mind o

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                                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                                          My man
                                                                          I'm comming o, so I can look into your eye

                                                                          Look into my eyes
                                                                          For your viewing pleasure, I have trapped
                                                                          The moon, the sun and the stars in my eyes
                                                                          See the wonders of their shining light, in my eyes all well mapped

                                                                          Nice poem, you done dey change field o

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                                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                                            She's giving you OCD shey..... Issaa sun trapping, moon trapping and star trapping sontin..... They shall all dab on it when they see her look into your eyes......😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝

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                                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                                              OCD.... Na, I'm not compelled to do anything, just motivated to..

                                                                              They shall all dab on it when they see her look into your eyes

                                                                              They have to Oooo, she reigns in that domain.

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