Damn mate,
"i know i have no future
i work for my abuser"
That's a powerful line that I can't help relating to a broader context than the subject of your poem.
Dark topic that needs a voice, thank you for shining a light on it
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thanks i dont really know if amy of the poems are good or not but liked yours and wanted someone to read a few of them and give me some input
much appreciated
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Keep writing mate!
It will continue to develop your style and flow. Play with language. Poems don't need to rhyme. Good or not good is subjective, the important thing is you are proud of your voice and that you are using it to say something that is true for you. You are tackling a range of really big social issues which, in my opinion (for what it's worth), is a wonderful use of your voice. You have some lines that really jump out at me and capture my imagination, and tickle my appreciation of language in a glorious way, for which I thank you!
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well thank you for the compliment and have a great evening its past my bedtime cheers
look forward to reading more of your stuff
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