RE: GRAVEDAD (Poema)

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GRAVEDAD (Poema)

in poesia •  7 years ago 

Muy descriptivo: "Le pintaron pajaritos en el aire"

Detalles ortográficos que se notan más en los escritos breves.
Corrígelos y luego yo borro este comentario.

Las cosas pequeñas deberían ser perfectas.

Saludos.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    es que hubo un error en realidad iba: solo yo anduve entre nubes

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Estimada @vickyx159, bienvenida. Hermoso poema. Quizá quieras acentuar las siguientes palabras: imaginé, aluciné, autoría, sígueme y seguiré.

      Escribe siempre, escribe de todo.

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