Peace is something that’s hard to find especially when you feel betrayed, hated someone, lied to and hurt. You can’t be at peace if you’ve still been through with that I guess. But in my poem, I’m finding my peace in Him. I have been totally lost and I even forgot how it feels like to talk to Him and so I’m writing this so you’d know a bit of me in that poem. Hope you’ll like it. Here it is..
“Finding my peace in You”
White sand, sunset’s about to come,
Standing there, acting like a dumb,
Watching the waves and the deep blue sea,
In a solemn place, thinking about Thee.
I seem to be lost, finding my way,
Waking every morning, feeling empty day by day,
Thinking what did I do with my life and such,
Knowing I haven’t talked to You really that much.
How can I find real peace, my Lord?,
My mind’s deranged, please let me cured,
I pray and pray that I’ll be at ease,
Please help me, let me find in You Thy peace.
That’s it. :) Before I end this, I’d like to thank @tony-duke and @ajremy for inspiring us by having this weekly contest. I’m glad I’m a part of it. Thank you very much. Godspeed! 💕
This is an extremely lovely poem...
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Thank you @ajremy :)
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Really.. I read this again and discovered how lovely it really is... The rhyme, the diction,
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Thank you again. I write stuffs in simple way but it’s always heartfelt. Never thought that you’d appreciate it like that but you did. Thank you really. :)
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Poetry is the language of the heart, mind and soul... I love anything that connects with me and this did
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Thank you. I’ll do better again. It’s something to look forward to. :)
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