POETIC SURGE POETRY CONTEST #1: EMPTINESS - The Words of an Empty Man

in poetic-surgecontest •  7 years ago 

Binded in shackle like when two lives become one
My body, Nolleyed Artistic values she painted
And designed my back with a three mouthed brush
Her behaviour had a knife, and like cutting through a bulb of onions
Let me put this on the table, my eyes had no plural
Its singular use was to assist me shed tears
She promised she wouldn't do this, I know I was wrong
I treated her badly, but I never expected her to retaliate
Now shes walked out of my life, and just like before creation
My world is without form, dark and shapeless
Empty, like the brains of a new born

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You didn't expected that she would retaliate..

Who kills you??my own expectations
Don't expect too much from someone..

True fact!

Nice word play. I love the rithym and the flow. Good job you did there. I hope to write this good someday.

Aaahh my mentor.good one

Your pots always sound like you have a lot on your mind

I think she does

Nice play on words here,,,, this is awesome...