Love in the air,
I hold my breath.
The room lay bare,
Mind of mine full like death.
Sitting on the shelf,
A quill and ink while I pray.
Write not to please self,
The bills to be paid.
My year to make a dime,
Wallet a void a vacuum.
One more line to make a rhyme,
But my head a black gloom.
What seekest thee from me?
Thou bloodthirsty fans.
Dip the quill in my blood,
But you still sink in the fangs.
My hand numb,
Heart in a rage spin.
Another beautiful dumb,
Damnit, again to the garbage bin.
I think this needs some special awards,,,,, this is awesome,,, good use of sacarsm and irony,,,,,, gudos brother
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This coming from you go the poetry section is a big encouragement to me. Thanks
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Reading another of your works again, not disappointed. And I totally agree with @tony-duke, this truly deserves an award.
You're good. Wishing you all the best @lordjames
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This is really good bro... you re growing higher everyday
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This was may favourite part -
Sitting on the shelf,
A quill and ink while I pray.
Write not to please self,
The bills to be paid.
-It flows like a song :)
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I wish I knew how to write 'em songs. But I'll settle with poetry. Maybe someday you will come turn my poems to lyrics
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Maybe :)
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Nice piece of work
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Thank you
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Hay Jimmy Jam you made me smile, in a good way! These are quite some lines!
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Glad you stopped at my blog today. You don't know what this means to me.
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Amazing and surprising...love the line But you still sink in the fangs and the transition...brilliant!
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Am grateful you enjoyed my work. This encourage me to do more.
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