hanya kabut putih, serupa awan-awan sirrus berarak pelan dihembus angin semilir
hampir tanpa pola, kelabu tak bercahaya.
carut- marut kenderaan
saling silang menyilang
di atas aspal-aspal panas,
dahulu-mendahui,
ditingkahi suara klakson-klakson mobil yang sambung-menyambung begitu bising memekakkan telinga.
diantara kaki batang-batang
beton menjulang,
para pedagang asongan berderet, berdesakkan, berlomba mendekati badan jalan hendak menjaja nyawa
kabut putih diatas kota ku,
seperti kafan putih menunggu datangnya kematian.
Telah kami upvote yah..
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Thanks @puncakbukit
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Puisi yang indah hari lebih istiqomah
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Thanks sudah membaca postingan saya, semoga bermanfaat.
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keren. trus berkarya !
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Wah @smcipa, sangat senang melihat kamu lagi. Thanks ya.
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puisinya sangat menyentuh
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Terima kasih @asmahusna untuk apresiasinya.
Salam dan selamat menulis.
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Sangat bermakna
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Terimakasih ibu @nyakniarco, sudah singgah di postingan saya.
Salam sore ibu.
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Memang sastrawan sejati. Maulah diajari menulis puisi...
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Hehe, tidak seproduktif @radjasalman, nulisnya kadang-kadang aja kalau ada inspirasi.
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menatap langit siang kotaku, apakah sama dengan kabut putih dikotaku.
Apakah kita mempunyai kota yang sama
@janvanhoess
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Hhehe, satu grup tapi tak saling mengenal. Mungkin sama @javanhoess
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ajari aku cara buat puisi donkkkk hehehehe
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Gampang @jhonwekk, hanya butuh imajinasi, emosi dan kemampuan mengolah kata.
Atau coba saja jatuh cinta, setiap menit tangan anda akan menulis puluhan puisi dengan sendirinya 😀
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Puisi yang bagus dan nyaman hati nge baca..
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Terima kasih yuzul, sudah menyukainya.
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