DELETED SCENES

abmakko (55) in poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

Living at the edge of a forgotten city,
Experiences become remnant memories.
Going down withered memory trees,
Roots of the mind spreading thin.

Do you have a moment for the moment,
Opportunities roll by like movie reels.
Looking through a glass prism,
Visions like changing color wheels.

On the top of my memory shelf,
There lies a dusty book titled me.
It's as old as earth covered gems,
Tales of the forgotten self.

Beyond the green screen of Illusion,
Memories drop to my forgotten ocean.
Like a motion film on a budget,
These little moments, My deleted scenes.

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penderis (63) · 7 years ago

I think some might find the deleted scenes to be a sad thought forgetting those moments, but if you remember that you are not only forgetting the good but also the bad then it begs the question , would we want to remember every moment?

Great poem and I love the change from color wheels to on the shelf , it transports you completely.

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abmakko (55) · 7 years ago

That is very positive outlook on it. thanks for your input :-) am glad you enjoyed it

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nationall (55) · 7 years ago

Unfortunately there are bad memories

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abmakko (55) · 7 years ago

Yes Indeed, although we tend to hold on more to the bad memories. thanks for reading

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