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The familiar curve that rise and falls.
The bubble of hope and expectancy.
Sweet tongues are telling tales of treasure.
A new life, A newborn, A new promise.
Slowly rising till it peaks and drops to dust.
A new love, A sweetheart, An heartrob.
The love candle burns away with melting wax.
Gentle whispers and fortune telling,
It sounds so good it could be a lie.
Through the window of oppourtunity,
A wishful breeze blowing bubbles.
Floating through space unbothered,
Aroused by an early promise.
Thanks for passing by :-)
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Yes, handle with care, lovely...
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yes... indeed. thanks for reading :-)
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My pleasure!
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This poem is a really well thought out expression of loss @abmakko. I really admire these lines:
and the ending as well. The extended metaphor of the bubble is handled well and comes through, lending a truly heart rending poingency to the whole poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for your always insightful commentary @raj808 . :-), the bubble is indeed very fragile
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The words are really refreshing !
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Thanks for reading buddy :-)
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Lovely poem. I hope the breeze blowing bubbles through the windows of opportunity is a good one for me.
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yes dear... we have to be hopeful. thanks for reading
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