An existential quest to be free,
How to be human and not to be.
The jailer clanks the Iron gates,
Breath fumes like rusted metal.
Should've known you were the one,
The ghost of many faces.
Hovering like troubled smoke,
Checking to see if I am woke.
A dialogue between split thoughts,
The struggle for the inner light.
Peeking outside the Prison Box.
Caught a glimpse, a reflection of god.
The thought walls of my own making,
Mind's crust reshaping as tectonic shift.
This is my Shawshank redemption,
Thinking through my own shit.
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The mind's a troublesome thing. I sometimes wonder if one could forgo having a mind - if it were possible in the first place - and be able to relish peace of mind or anything else, for that matter.
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Unfortunately One cannot experience thoughts without the mind. I don't even think its possible to think outside the mind, I guess the only way is by expanding the walls of the mind to achieve higher thoughts and actions. Thanks for reading my poem
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Beautiful poem...Hovering like troubled smoke,
Checking to see if I am woke.....wonderful
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Thanks for the compliment. am glad you liked it :-)
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Nice man! You might want to look at my installation. It's not exactly the same subject but it's also about mind prison https://steemit.com/art-installation/@haedre/the-inner-cell-an-art-installation-in-a-former-gdr-prison
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Wow. nice work there. the patterns are so hypnotic.
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Beautiful and powerful poetry
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Thanks for appreciating my poetry. :-).
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My pleasure
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RESONATES!
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:-) that is the reason I write, to resonate with people. am glad you enjoyed it
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Wonderful post! I think the idea of our own mind being a prison is something we can all relate to--and you’ve put it to words so beautifully.
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yeah. thought patterns can become strongholds on the mind, thanks for the compliment.
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a dialog between split thoughts..... tell me ...dont tell me.
shawshank is the new orange.
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Sweet lines @buttcoins
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