RE: DANCE (Original Poetry) [Day 8]

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DANCE (Original Poetry) [Day 8]

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I like both versions. In the first version I liked your use of metaphor for a dancer, and tying it to imagery like 'jail freedom' to express a total freedom found in dance.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thanks. I am glad you got that and that you liked both versions.

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