RE: Belajar membuat puisi

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Belajar membuat puisi

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Itu sudah bagus..
Cuma puisinya langsung terputus di dua baris trakhir. Coba dibaca lagi. Dan perbaiki..

Good luck :)

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Iya memang terputus karena enggk tahu mau ditambahin apa lagi 😬
    Terimakasih yaa

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Ok. Lanjutkan ..
      Tambahin lagi stelah "namun ia bawakan hujan"

      😊

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Oke terimakasih banyak
        Di postingan berikutnya akan di tambahkan

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Ok. Aku akan mengunjunginya lagi stelah powervote100% 😂

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Namun ia bawakan hujan
            Agar tercipta keindahan setelahnya
            Hingga langit pun ceria bersinar terang
            untuk meneruskan yang namanya kehidupan

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                ·  7 years ago 

              ciee. ada yg diam-diam cari perhatian @altazam sama @irma27 😗😗

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Huuuuuu 😱 @altazam mulai . Sang raja kata kata :v

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  dan sang ratu puisi @irma27

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Bahaha cocok berarti kan ? 😱

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      ahaha yup. emang cucok. jadoh ketemu di kolong komen 😀

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Bagus juga. Terimakasih banyak sarannya @altazam

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Kasih...
                          itu belum seberapa @irma27

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Iya betol 😱

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Namun ia bawakan hujan
                              Agar tercipta keindahan setelahnya yaitu pelangi
                              Hingga langit pun ceria bersinar terang
                              untuk meneruskan yang namanya kehidupan

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Nyan kakupateh LOL 😱

                                Trus pelanginya gmna? Ahaha

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  ahaha. cari perhatian 😗😀

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Harus sama-sama cari perhatian, kalau enggk siapa yg bakalan komen dan upvote @safruddin88 ya kan @adfizz ??

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      ciee. ya nya kenapa harus ke @adfizz ??
                                      ahaha

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        Cieeeeeeee 😱

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          @Altazam ga di mention? 😂
                                          ...
                                          Iya itubener . Saya setuju. Meskipun ga nyambung . LOL 😱

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            Yalah. Soalnya gw demen 😱 bahaha

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              njirr. akhirnya bocor juga. 😂

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                Bahaha jngan bocorin dong kalo gw demen sama zzz . 😂
                                                😱

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