"Three poems about dangerous lifestyles"
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A good explanation for the poems you're about to read would be living in today's world. We are all reactions to our own actions. We are responsible for the way life is today. We are not innocent in any way. What we choose is a choice we make for each other. We blame it on the governments but we vote for what we are dealt in life. We must take a stand as one. Let the world hear our voice and let the governments of the world see our action.
This first poem is about the rules and regulations we are supposed to live by. Yet the rules and regulations keep us prisoners of the governments that rule over us. Taking away freedoms we thought we were entitled to but never really had.
We are like mindless robots walking around aimlessly through life. Ignoring all the freedoms that are taken away from us every day. We need to speak up and stand up or we will be lost forever. We have the power. We are the voice. We are the answer. Each one of us has a choice. We just need to come together as one and make the right choice. Put aside our own indifference and vote for a better way of life. A true Quality of life.
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“Break away”
3-3-2018When your relatives go missing,
And cannot seem to be found.
Don’t go blame the government,
If you find them hidden underground.
Your Safety is guaranteed,
If you bow down to our rules,
But disobey our written instructions,
And watch us turn into howling ghouls.
If your poor and on the street,
Don’t turn to us for any help.
We do not endorse a quality of life,
To your pathetic begging self.
We will let you into our circle,
As long as your attire is perfect.
But we reserve the right to ignore you,
If the color of your skin doesn’t fit.
Your Reservations are set,
You have got a ticket in your hand.
But we do not promise on our side,
that we will eventually let you in.
Your Travel arrangements are made,
And your luggage is packed away.
But if someone more important arrives.
You’ll have to sit back and wait.
If you don’t understand English,
We’re not sorry for your inconvenience.
Maybe you should have studied more,
Before traveling to our land of proper etiquette.
Freedom is not given freely,
In this great land of persecution.
So take a seat over there to your left,
And we’ll begin your transformation.
If you happened to be stopped and detained,
We will get to your interrogation in awhile.
You must have been selected correctly,
And met one of our watchful profiles.
Your Innocent until proven guilty,
An urban legend at best.
The police will begin your beating soon,
No need to make any requests.
Your rights haven’t been given as of yet,
We will decide if you're sound of mind.
And only after we slam you into a cage,
Will we feel you'll be worth the time?
Your country’s religion isn’t working,
We feel it’s worthless and corrosive.
So we’ll be making plans real soon,
To begin our air raids of explosives.
The people of today need to realize,
That our governments are the ones at fault.
Not religion, not color or culture,
We need to bring this way of life to a halt.
Because if we allow it to continue,
All freedoms will fade into darkness.
Quality of Life will become a Myth,
And the world will conform to the blindness.
Stand up and begin a new journey,
Take pride in who you are now.
And “break away” from the mindless wandering,
Of government controlled herds of cows.
This poem is about the shootings in the schools of today. We need to protect our children better. We need to bring families together and help them with their children. Too many children of today live a very abusive lifestyle. They have no one to talk to, look up to and ask for help from. They are emotionally and mentally disturbed because of the life they are forced to live.
If we, as a society come together and help each other. No child will want to use a gun on each other. We need to have better control and better rules of bullying in schools. This is getting way out of control and we need to put an end to it now. We need to help encourage our children to be strong and love themselves and everyone around them.
We must raise them right. Teach them to have respect for everyone and everything. But it all begins with love. Love is the answer and the cure. We must teach them to care. To put value in life. Put the value in their own life. Once respect and love have been taught, then they can begin to heal and help heal the world. We must become a "one world community" plain and simple. Love, Jeronimo Rubio
“Fast moving metal”
3-2-2018
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Sounds of “fast moving metal”,
Fill the air in a schoolyard of fright.
Bullets cut through their skin,
Like a stalker who kills in the night.
Innocent bodies lay lifeless,
Screams of terror echoing in the halls.
Classrooms filled with blood flowing,
As another child is hit and falls.
Sickness sends chills through their skin,
While confusion enters their mind.
As the madman whose hidden in child's clothing,
Continues firing as if they were blind.
No immediate target is needed,
Spraying lead as they watch them run.
Just meaningless thoughts of deception,
Why life sucks and has never been fun.
Sirens rushing to the massacre,
Guns pulled and aimed at their head.
A problem child stands in fear,
As bullets race to their death.
Is this another victim of circumstance?
or maybe another abusive story untold?
And who will hear it now,
As their body lies still growing cold.
Talks of gun control off in the distance,
But no one can come to a logical conclusion.
So bodies keep piling up on the ground,
While politicians ignore the solution.
Will you allow this stupidity to continue?
As you bury your children once again.
Or stand up and raise your voice loud,
To bring this destruction of life to an end.
One nation under God they say,
In God we trust is stamped everywhere.
And yet little angels lye in pools of blood,
As politicians of the world don't seem to care.
In the world today. I know we have so many reasons to be angry. Our governments are insufficient, inadequate and, really, just don't give a damn about anything but themselves and their pockets. Unfortunately, "It" is what it is". But to bring this anger home to our family, our friends, our loved ones is just plain "stupid". It sure doesn't help us get along any better and eventually tears us apart inside and in life.
A wise man once said "Imagine the power anger has. If we can just take the power of anger and turn it into something positive. Imagine what we would be able to accomplish. Imagine the change to the world, for the better we could bring". What powerful words these are. Anger is destructive. Anger causes harm to everything around us. Anger is what brings us loneliness. Anger is the bringer of sorrows.
Reasonable thinking is needed today. Calm conversation in place of anger will get us through life much easier and happier. We must think before we speak, always. And then we can help create a world of love for all on great mother earth. Love, Jeronimo Rubio
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"Bringer of sorrows"
3-1-2018I am the Bringer of Sorrows,
I am each moment of grief.
I am the final chapter,
As I watch you fall to your knees.
I am the word that is spoken,
My thoughts like a king of the land.
More tears I bring to the heartsick,
As I lead you to your end holding hands.
No color of skin do I bare,
Like clay, I form to what I need.
The frown on my face is dark midnight,
My veins filled with your life as you bleed.
My minions are war and destruction,
My demons are self-righteousness and lust.
Your weakness is the belief in my writings,
Of selfishness and misleading trust.
I fill your mind with visions of peace,
As I steal like a thief in the night.
I show you treaties of resolution,
While I enslave you and take away your rights.
My fool in the morning you become,
My mindless robot through each day.
And down to the grave, I will lead you,
As I sit, laugh and watch you decay.
Who am I in your mind you may wonder,
But I’d be a fool to ever let you know.
So I stay hidden as you dance to my bullets,
And watch you die in sadness very slow.
But you know me you see me each day,
I live deep in your own mind.
I’m the anger you try to control,
And destroys every part of mankind.
Take a close look in the mirror and you’ll see,
In your eyes like blood red domination.
I am you and the beginning of your demise,
That leads you to your own damnation.
I bury all the love in your heart,
Keep it hidden just out of plain sight.
If you could find it then I would be dead,
And once again you could live a good life.
So ignore me and continue my growth,
I like it, I think it’s much fun.
And when you take your last breath,
My job here on earth has been done.
Text and poems authored by: @jeronimorubio
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This is the most interesting style of writing serious things in poem format.
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Thank you so much @introvert for your kind words. I am happy that you enjoyed the words of the writings and poetry. Have an awesome day.
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Beautiful .. wonderful words
The world needs to power values and morals before interests ,Thanks for the poems
Well done ,for more creativity
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I agree with you 100% @slimanepro. We also need to stand together as one much more often in order to help those who are not so strong and need our strength. Have a awesome day.
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Being brave means to know something is scary, difficult, and dangerous, and doing it anyway, because the possibility of winning the fight is worth the chance of losing it.
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I agree with you completely @paasz. Every day we wake up will envoke new challenges for us all. It is how we deal with them and how strong we remain against them that will bring us forward in life. Have an awesome day.
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Wonderful!!! I just love it :)
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Thank you so Much @gomovies. I am so glad you enjoyed the writings and poetry. Have an amazing day.
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A man's life is the accumulation of the choices he has made, nice write up
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bro fllow me
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Thank you so much @dammieyale. You are absolutely right. And the choices we make we reflect on everyone around us eventually. Have an Awesome Day.
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in each of these words is very meaningful, everything is encouraging.
Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you @jasonmunapasee and your welcome. I am very happy that you have found meaning in the writings and poetry. This is what I hope I am able to do every time I write something. Have an awesome day.
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Wow lot of teaching ..so much to learn from this peoms....
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Thank you so much for your words @pricelessrita. I am glad that you really enjoyed the writings and poetry. "We are all teachers, yet we are all still students forever in life". Have an amazing day.
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beautiful lines <3 heart touching i like it @adsactly
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Thank you so much @khushbakht. I am very happy that you enjoyed reading the writings and poetry. Have a beautiful day.
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I am touched by the first poem about the dangers that can threaten the lives of our children.. I'd like to urge all parents to further ensure the safety of their children by teaching them to recognize danger on their own, without a need for anyone to stand-by at close quarters on 24-hour-a-day watchdog duty. We've sold kids short by assuming that they are incapable of learning to avoid danger independently, and we've done so at their expense...a fact which is in evidence every time we see a toddler running onto a busy road.
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Thank you for your words of knowledge @kopuba01. Your words are so true and you are 110% correct about our children. We truly must pay more attention to them and guide them in the right direction always. Have an amazing day.
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it seems killings in campuses are becoming rampant. Its time that gun ownership be restrained
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Amazing poetry. They show how good you are in creativity little wonder you have a mind blowing $100+k in Just about 5mins.
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I really appreciate your words @essiential. I try my best to bring creativity to everything I do. Have a beautiful day.
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heart-touching poetry
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Thank you @blushinggirl. I am very happy that you enjoyed my writings and poetry. Have a beautiful day.
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thanks dear :)
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"Sickness sends chills through their skin,
While confusion enters their mind."
just beautiful lines amazing words
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Thank you so much @farah-kamran. Thank you for your kind words. I am very happy that you really enjoyed my poetry and writings. I hope you have a very happy life filled with blessings as I wish this for all on great mother earth.
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Good poetry well done
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Agreed :)
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Thank you @ isco and @taqi. I am so pleased that you both enjoyed the writings and poetry. I wish you both a very awesome happy day.
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Well written. I resteem it
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THank you so much @jaber-hossain. I am very happy you enjoyed them. Have an awesome day.
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Really Amazing.But too long.It's read to hard for me.
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Thank you so much @mdmahmudulhasan for your kind words. I hope you get a chance to come back and finish reading at your leisure. Have a wonderful day.
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Realy
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"Your Innocent until proven guilty,
An urban legend at best."
No doubt some truth to that. Quite profound.
Thanks for the post.
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Thank you so much @rhyscn. I am really happy that you found my poetry and writings filled with the truth of the world we live in today. I hope you have an awesome day with meany blessings.
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Each poem above enlighten the minds of every
individual in some aspects of life. Somehow it also gives me a feeling of realization, understanding and awareness of the things around me.
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Thank you for your very kind words @hopefrecy. I am so happy that you enjoyed the poetry and writings so much. May all your days be enlightened. May the truth always be seen. Blessings to all on great mother earth.
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Saya lebih suka puisi yang terakhir "Bringer of duka"
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love your name.the name of my youngest son a nurse is Poyok...hello
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every sentence contains a very deep meaning, I enjoy all the poetry above ... a very good poem and has opened the insight and my way of thinking @adsactly
you are great my bro @jeronimorubio
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Thank you so much @mfano. Thank you for your kind words. I am so happy that you enjoyed the poetry. In today's society, we all need a lot of truth to improve the life for millions. Blessings to you.
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This is an ultimate message of every religion of the world that everyone is equal before the GOD, there is no worth of skin color and languages rather actions.
Such a deep and touching message, loved it @jeronimorubio :)
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Beautiful!!!
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Powerful words my friend. Very well written.
I wish I had answers, but at least knowing the problems is part of the eventual solution.
Thank you for them!
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Thank you so much @bigtom13. You are always too kind with your words. I am so happy you enjoyed all of the poetry and writings. See ya soon on discord.
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poetry always tells the truth about the world and give you motivation also .. nice post
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You are so correct @xee96. Poetry usually is the expression of life experiences. This is true. I am happy that you enjoyed the poetry and words written. Have a beautiful Day.
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its my pleasure sir that i have read your beautiful words which is composed in a poetry.
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excellent post.. my dear friend @adsactly..
i like your poem..
thank you for sharing with us..
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Hearttouching
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"Three poems about dangerous lifestyles" in your first poem is a description of the government where I live, Venezuela ... it looks like it's written in a script ... thanks for sharing ...
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same here
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Good poetic work. I love poetry.
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me too
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Tha's So Sad. 😖😖😖
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Breakaway.
But living freely is not being totally free. If you do what you want, you'll be lock-up. You vote who to sit in that mighty chair that everyone's fighting for, wanted so bad. But once the power is in their hand they forget everything they promised. Everything they said.
If only love governs our hearts and soul.. What a lovely life the world can be! ♥
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happening i nmy country my friend
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I have read this wonderful puiai about **three poems about a dangerous lifestyle ** I was very impressed with the word
we need to speak up and stand up or we will be lost forever. We have the power. We are the sound of her voice. We are the answer. Each of us had a choice
I remembered the words BOB MARLEY (Better to die fighting for the sake of freedom from being a prisoner of everyday of your life.)
I am also open to the third poem about
** Too many children currently living a lifestyle that is very rough. They don't have anyone to talk to, find and ask for help.**
Should we have to be fair and take care of the kids, because the next generation . Fair is considered the same weights, blame the wrong and allow the true, return the rights owner and do not unjust above him (save of the children)
Thanks for sharing @adsactly
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perfectly said
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good poetry heart touching words
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You are so smart. Well done!
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The Poem Is so emotional .. nice one keep it up .,,
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I read a poem from adsactly
of pain and love and death
i tried to read them cheerfully
but still i somehow wept.
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This is good, really good , if only we can stand together as one, then our voice would be heard loud and clear ... nice post and thanks for sharing
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This is a very good post. Thank You so much for share.
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MUY REFLEXIVO LOS POEMAS. REFLEJA COMO DEBEMOS TENER CALIDAD DE VIDA. SE NOTA QUE ESTÁS BIEN UBICADO EN LA VIDA.
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Thanks for sharing these beautiful poems.
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Oh guys...very meaningful your article...
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very nice photography and your poems my friend
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great post
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so much interesting...nice post..☺
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Break away is best one...
thanks for share
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Please upvote me and follow me.. i will do same
https://steemit.com/photos/@suborna77/hi
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the curse of poverty:
Poverty is purely man made;
So it has to be eradicated from its root;
The society afflicted with poverty;
Is reprehension of entire human society;
Corruption is the source of poverty;
Only a fearless society can be said;
Free from all poverty;
Where the people are dumb and discounted;
Poverty exists there;
two poems seems artificial...i like the "Bringer of Sorrows"
more than another..
@upvoted @resteem
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So sad Allah bless him
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so true in real life, nice poem
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Very good, thanks
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A worth to read article. Very inspiring! Thank you for your blessed talent.
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Try not to cry little one..
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thanks, very good post !!!!
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awesome writing for you
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I like your poem 😊
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Very Useful
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@adsactly-witness
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Great ! nice post.
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It is a pity that people destroy each other!
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Hermosas palabras que nos hace reflexionar...
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Your article is well written, and I will continue to pay attention to you. I want to ask you how to do this steemit? What do you do to make your steemit get such a high income? I sincerely invite you to learn. We can make good friends, are here to help each other. Look forward to your reply, thank you!
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What is considered spam or abuse?
Leaving nearly identical or materially similar comments on multiple posts.
You keep posting this comment again and again on random posts.
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Loved these words, so funny in a way : If you don’t understand English,
We’re not sorry for your inconvenience....so true.
I've just watched Breaven, a drama movie but inspired from real life...yor words can connect with this movie. Check it ou! P.S. Greetings from Romania!
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This piece is sexily sumptuous.
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Nice write up dear
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In each of these words is very nice.Thank you for posting.
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Best post...check my post many informasi and funny blog.
Please check my post and follow me.. @deditwing
good luck every body
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Life is a huge topic and this is great thank you for sharing this @adsactly
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A poem that gives an amazing impression of life, I am very interested in your work.@adsactly
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Nice article but here is my point of view, apart from the fact that we are responsible for the choices we make, why does life not give all of us equal platform because some person have made mistakes because they felt life has been fair to some persons and unfair to others.
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sorrow is d boss of disappointment kill it for chill
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In this life we live, to every action there an equal and opposite reaction. We are who are today because of our actions and towards our own problems. Thanks alot for the great work posted here @adsactly.
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Fast moving metal - it sounds like a name for rock band :)
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Safe ☹️☹️☹️
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Hello brother @adsactly, very good information, is very right in what he means his poems, in all governments it seems that the ones that benefit the most are the e dula, the others that are scrubbed, as the saying goes, everyone does his side, or the one that comes behind that arree ..
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poetry that is very touching to anyone who reads it, high value writings that bring the reader to feel moved by the contents of the poem
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excellent ,thankyou
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very impressed
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Far be it from me to say anything about poetry, but I hardly know how to respond to these.
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So touching words! Thanks for your sharing the poem. My heart is completely touching!
By the way, I have poetry. I hope you want to give me feedback. Thanks
You're My Glorious Sunset
https://steemit.com/smartphonephotography/@anggreklestari/you-re-my-glorious-sunset-day-5-100-days-of-poetry-challenge
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thanks for this, this will serves as my inspiration to finish my poems. <3
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great!! love it....peace!!!!!
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good luck every body
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These poems along with these pictures really touched me!
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very good
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Hey it's Very wonderful poetry....
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aah! i stopped reading at "If your poor and on the street". should it not be "you're"?
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this is a great poetry ever !! good job @adsactly
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The fast moving metal poem gets to me as I can relate to it perfectly as we ourselves are subjects to government victimization.
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Very powerful
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envious of the talent!!
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break-away → In today's reality, people keeps on blaming other people without accepting what has already been done. They keep on making it big deal without embracing the fact that it really was..
Thank you for your poetry @adsactly I hope that many will inspires your poetry since it was base of what really the world is now.
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Congratulations @adsactly!
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Infact every poem above is a bitter truth. Really awesome piece of writing
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I really love your piece.... we need not to blame our government for the choices we make. when you want to heal a sick tree you don't just cut off the branches, you start from the root. this we cant autocorrect we must do it ourselves. its time to break free
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Me gustaría ser como usted por escrito, además de que ha logrado llevar la escritura a su corazón y hacer que nos venga de alguna manera, es por eso que voy a seguirlo porque tienes algo que otros no tienen .
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Our conscience will ask us to account.
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so nice...
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