❤️ Burning Embers Of Love ❤️
In the afterglow of love
How easily we moved together
How our bodies fit like a glove
In the passionate heat of desire
How exciting was the sight of your body
As you moved with me in front of the fire
By the smoldering firelight
My mind began to wonder
If this was where we'd stay all night
As you moved your lips to mine
Such passion and such wanting
As our hearts began beating in time
Moved like a cloud around the room
Such a powerful aroma
So easily it made us swoon
I sampled from your lips
As we became one with each other
And you moved above my hips
To heaven and beyond
Away from all our worries
Where you and I could abscond
With such anticipated delight
When you and I next rendezvous
Beside the warmth of the firelight
May never heal a hateful mind,
But all the hate in the world
will never touch a loving heart."
This wish it would be granted
As you moved your lips to mine
Such passion and such wanting
As our hearts began beating in time
Amazing lines
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Very very lovely post sir
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Very lovely post
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WoW That is beautiful, that is the first poem that has ever brought a tear to my eye...lol Keep up the awesome work. PS Thank you.
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Great work
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beautifully written i hope you write free verses also. i would love to read your work. keep it up!
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Thanks for your work @adsactly Followed ... I'm starting to read it now. I wish you continued success. I will continue to follow you. Take care of yourself, my dear friend.
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This wish it would be granted
As you moved your lips to mine
Such passion and such wanting
As our hearts began beating in time.
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Nice poem @adsactly
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wow... lovely post.......thanks
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Hello @adsactly
This invokes indescribable feelings. It is indeed a masterpiece.
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Hello my dear friend . You're really your good and researcher. It's good to follow you. I have not Reading the text but I am sure it is a good and good subject. I wish you continued success. I wish this shape continues to be good. Good bye my dear friend.
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Amazing use of metaphors
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Thank you for posting this lovely moment in time for you. I was studying your stuff right now. Just a good time to be a successful person. Followed... @adsactly :)
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Please bro give me one vote and comment please please please
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Amazing poem
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wow very very awsome poetry 💕
thanks for sharing my friend 💕
Always be Happy
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excelente combination of love respect
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Please bro give me one vote and comment please please
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Great Poem I love how it all flowed together
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nice lovely post very nice pis vote
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It's very good a meaningful words together . I really enjoyed
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Love is in the air. It is a poem full of feelings
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What a beauty!!
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Beautiful :) best wishes to you!
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@adsactly, awesome and powerful words are displayed here. Very romantic and nicely written. Post upvoted
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verry great and beautiful poetry.
please visit my blog too @Poetic-Power becoz i write a poetry too...
i hope u have a nice day...
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awesome poetry
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Lovely Poem
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You inspire me! Keep the world beautiful!
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nice poetry, thanks
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Wonderful poem but description of making love is little obvious :P
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That was just lovely.
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I'm not actually that religious man mate but I say you have an ample faith to your creator. I hope for a good riddance to you!
Spread the love!
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hi @adsactly
Thanks for this great post, and for sharing your thoughts with us. Upvoted
Kindly visit my post too as i just did on your post and following for more of your great posts.
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Great post. I love the poem. It's diction is spot on and the message is well communicated. Follow me also @khojo as i am a lover and a writer of poetry
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Yo ,
Nice work sir
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