Free time
Have you ever had that longing,
That desire to see and hear them,
That ache in your soul,
As you feel, you're no longer whole.
I had way to much free time on my hands,
It lead my mind off in a million directions;
One, thinking about my own imperfections
Another, about my missguided perceptions.
All I want is to see your smile,
And have you near for a while,
I want to talk to you face to face
Surrounded by your grace
I just want to be next to you
I'll do everything I can do,
But at the moment I feel as though I'm not what you need,
Todays spare time made my heart bleed.
I fell into the pit of dispair,
As I imagined nightmares,
I don't want to lose you,
Not now.
Not ever.
One day I'd like to be together.
By Ethan
2018/02/03
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Beautiful .. well done
I felt that .. yes that is .message delivered
Thank you for sharing your words with us.
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heart touching words...
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Love is not always beautiful, like a beautiful flower, surely one day the flower will wither.
and to avoid going back to ourselves, how we treat that love.
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Very emotional. Nice job.
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CORTA, REFRESCANTE, EXQUISITO AL PALADAR MENTAL DEL SENTIMIENTO
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Not Now
Not Ever..
Love it <3
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Touching ! Almost into tears ! What a poetry !
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Quite poetic and got me thinking. Thanks for sharing
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Write time is exam good and bad time are coming on every time
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idle hands do the devil's work
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very nice
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wow words that deeply touched my heart, an inspiration for me
Thank @africaunited
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https://steemit.com/photography/@ubiee/why-men-were-eager-for-discoveries
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Just beautiful. If I wants to send my articles to you, how do I go about it?
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yah boss i was already followed you and every day check out your post beacuse you are genius
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Great poetry
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Wow beautiful poem, very intense
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Great poetry...loved it
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simple, short and straightforward. nice
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Good post dear
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podrías escribir menos expresando la misma intensidad. del resto bien. te seguiré. con gusto leeré tu proximo post
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Excellent Poem, and no, I cannot fault your Grammar.
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Nice @africaunited
Please follow me @erjaoktafian
Thanks..
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awww. In a relationship, there is always this someone who loves the most. If only everything is fair when it comes to relationship then I guess there will be no more hurting.
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Great post that's how 99% of people think but thinking it does not make it true
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Nice. I like your poetry.
Poetry is a vernacular painting arranged by rhymes. Poetry is the story of a series of events in life. Reality is the basic idea of poetry creation, then processed in imaginative language to produce good literary works
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Beautiful!! I just thought it is not complete...but that is what I loved about it because you never know what is in store for you.
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Beautiful poem. I have followed you. I will love if you will be kind enough to check out my blog. I write poems too.
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WOW THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!! This is so heart wrenching. Good job on this one! What a wonderful mind you have. I also love writing myself! Infact I've done a freewrite for the first time. I tried to do a single prompt under "crazy" and I hope you'll take time to read! I hope you'll leave a note so I could see how my writing went. See you around! 🤗
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El Psy Kongroo.
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Simply just awsome..keep up the good work dear..
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Nice work there dude ... upvoted ... have a look at mine too you will like it
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Not bad boii
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Awesome post! I invite you to visit our blog and vote us back! And of course to enjoy our content :)
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Beautiful
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