tides of torment enclosing him
secluded by his own aversion
his cursed soul
executed without option
his solitary spirit
inhabited, but true and ever strong
insists of him-
'' what have I done, so wrong?''
''do not you see?'' - resonated a voice
his broken shell
''behold the rapture- I deliver, the malice I dispel''
his soul fluctuated at the thought.
an exposed pretender
revealed in the light
where mask of deception faded
into the darkest of the night
the spirit whispered low until all it could see
was the vibration of a light
beyond the misery.
''why hide behind the dim''- it taunted
without doubt
an echo
“cannot you see the glee the mask brings about?''
predominant in that coercion was not his true intention
the mask- ageless wins.
it's dominion, its intervention.
secluded soul singing it's sorrowful plea
''the mask is your reaper, why cannot you see''
misconceptions in the dark
of a deceived and dreary heart.
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Oh, this is a very Dark one. I turned off all the lights and lit a candle the second and third readings. I must say my senses were heightened when I did this and your words sent chills throughout my body. You seem to be taking it up a level everytime you write which amazes me in the short time I've been following you...
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I hope it wasnt too spooky :] it endes up sounding like a horror !!!!!
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No, not a Horror...
Just Suspenseful and Dark.
Looking forward to your future projects!
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that's good , I didn't want to give you the spooks :]
Did you see steemit has it's own version of a' youtube' now.... obviously better... more freedom !
it's called DTube ! ... Opens up a world of possibilities
It's been running 8 days already! <<< the creator speaks about it in that link, lol
more ways to build SBD <3
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No, I had no idea about DTube! Thank You @aineyann
I will check into this! Will you be posting videos on this Dtube?
It would be cool to hear you read your Wonderful poems in your Irish voice!:)
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good postt
upvote.
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thank you SO much 💜
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This post has received a 0.39 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @banjo.
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dark, bold and mysterious poem!
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Thank You !!!! I am happy you have appreciated it and noticed the mystery :)
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2 or 5 lines is crucial to me when I'm reading a poem. You have to struck me in my core or else I'll pass it like it was a mere statue in front me. I've read a lot of poems that has a potential but short of using the right symbols or whatever they want to convey to his/her reader... You have that quality...
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Thank you my dear :] I am glad you have seen all the symbols ... there are many who read and pass by ... & dont understand meanings... maybe find too confusing ?!? ... but I enjoy writing this way . It opens many possibilities to different people !!! I appreciate that you read so many!!!
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I will read more despite my busy schedule... Ber month is coming...
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Magnificent piece. I love the cadence and flow, and the message held within. :)
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Thanks my dear its a spooky one !!
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That's a neat story telling poem :D
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thanks, i appreciate you popping by to check it out :]
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This post has received a Bellyrub and 3.05 % upvote from @bellyrub thanks to: @aineyann. Send SBD to @bellyrub with a post link in the memo field to bid on the next vote, every 2.4 hours. Be sure to vote for my Pops, @zeartul, as Steem Witness Hope you enjoyed your bellyrub!
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Darkly moving and true
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Hey lovely lady :)
Thanks for stopping by!!!.. I love to see you here xx
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Phew... feels... don't know the right words... thinking of "Vandyke Brown"... while I notice, that you chose the matching picture perfectly already!
When are we going to hear this?
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I adore that sepia coloring!!... that antique look!..can't stop using it :]
Ohh I am so so excited for it.. but I want to be as perfect as I can make it... it may even take a week.. I hope not more.. and I hope I will sound acceptable !!!
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Already trying to imagine your voice :-)
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I really hope I suits my writing well.. haha :]
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Oh, it so does!! Are you planing to post on DTube? I posted my first video just now... in case you'd like to see me painting ;-)
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Yes, I would like to make a channel, so I can cross promote :]
Absolutely!!!... what is the link:)
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I can't wait to see your channel, hope you are working on it now!!
OK... short break then, and with your permission: https://dtube.video/v/reinhard-schmid/xmwgzc5g
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I had to watch twice. Finally I get to see just how big that scale looks in reality!!!
A glimpse of a master working with his craft!
& I was not familiar with this DTube, keep me updated when posting new ones too!!!
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This post received a 4.0% upvote from @randowhale thanks to @aineyann! For more information, click here!
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What do you think of mine?
https://steemit.com/longarticle/@aureliusdares/marcus-aurelius-the-stoic-way-mastering-cynism-with-nerves-of-steel
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I flagged, this seems to be an inappropriate place to advertise your post.
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Can you please explain ?! My poem is all abstract ! ....
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I didn't flag your post I flagged the person advertising in your post hun I upvoted your post.
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Thank Goodness I thought I was after scaring you awful xx
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Nah you're good lol
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I upvoted your comments as well :) hope the little I can offer helps you feel better.
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awww too sweet! thanks dear , nice gesture :)
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oh - rly I gave a re-steem; ain't that the code of the bots that are running on this place? Bots make mistakes; since you judge an human action.... funny you do it to this content that I shared.
I expected more re-steems; either way; keep on doing whatever you think is right - no matter if your senses of good and right might be off.
Hmmmm I cannot resist myself; I am going to ask: what other action could you had done? Did you read the content? Cause I don't mind receiving one flag if that person also read it; if he then actually finds out he enjoys it..... at least you would had then listened to the other-side (a quality most people lack).
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