Hi there, @pathforger!

Thanks for the feedback! I must say that by 'revisiting' it I didn't really mean here, but eventually in general (in print?) some day...

as for the bias, yes, it is there, palpably there, but I can't really remember who the 'he-llain' is.

thanks for the lovely verse at the end - were it mine, it would fit perfectly!

Have an awesome day!