Like spring

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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Spring flowers begin to break
The color is cheerful, adorns the world
Also the dew that falls on the tip of the leaf
Bring the cool in the beautiful morning

You're sitting on the other end
It seemed to be a spring in my world
Treat each heart with a new color

The smile you present As a bud begins to grow
Look fresh though seem shy embarrassment

Your eyes gaze at me
Like the morning sun
Illuminate the world but its warm never hurt

Such is the spring that indicates the cold has passed
As it is also semi which signifies a new spirit
And that's the kind of aura I think about you
Reminded me that I still have a long story
What I have to go with you
Certainly everything will be more beautiful and more colorful
If you exist
And keep going there
Being a beautiful spring
For my life and my life

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Well that's very sweet :) However probably best to avoid tagging a poem like that in the future - it could get flagged for example ;). Still a sweet poem though.

Thank you, I really appreciate your comments, maybe in the future I will try to be better again
@xaero1

[ By tagging I meant with 'me' btw...that was all my comment was about... but seems you may have edited it as i don't see the reference any more :) ]

Anyway, cool poem!

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Upvoted and also resteemed :)

thank a lote @super-man

Hi! I like your poems.