DAYDREAMS is a journal of my thoughts, the fiction that colors my mind. Each post is a thought of its own. They are not meant to connect; although, at times there are common themes.
Episode Twenty Nine
We accept that her tear is an offering,
a framework supporting redemption,
a delicate string transposing
the notes in a chord
or some random memory
she hears in blue velvet
while something quite bolder
is dressed up in sequins.
We follow its path down her cheek,
a river that tip-toes on crystals
and lands on the altar.
Some think its a trail,
a meandering walk
that is broken,
a limp left alone
and the sound of it dragging.
Others see sadness,
a lake filled with salt
on a day when the wind
blows over light without stopping
or offering prayers.
I am uncertain and ask if her sorrow
defines a new joy,
like something
that somebody gives as a gift,
or a moment when all is forgotten
except how the sun falls warm
on a shoulder.
b e g i n n i n g - t o - e n d
I am a retired art teacher and a wannabe writer. Everything I create is for my own enjoyment. I don’t work for others because I want total freedom to express what I want. All the work I post is original.
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EPISODE TWENTY SEVEN
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beginningtoend you poetry is very great and one all content of text excellent
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Thanks, have a good day.
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Powerful poem.
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Many thanks, have a great Brooklyn day.
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Lady fate is knocking on my door
Even though my muscles are sore
I still raise myself to be a gracious host
I remember that even in my best moments she still never for me raised a toast.
All I can do is offer her what meager I do have
I will now do my part and let her leave
No point in now taking from her
When the unkind father time has left within me no desire
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It always pays to be nice to fate.
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Really great poem my friend and it hits from the beginning with these words :" we accept that her tear is an offering, a framework supporting redemption, a delicate string transposing the notes in a chord.. "
What a beautiful and strong words...which are impressive..
Thank you for sharing and have a nice day my friend...
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Thank you my friend, I hope it’s a great day in turkey.
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Great work Sucsesfuly @beginingtoed
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Thanks.
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This part of your day dreaming is catching and I want to catch up with you on this one.
If I may ask what do you mean by that? Am curious to know. Am following up from the very beginning to end. @beginningtoend. Good work
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The path of her tear (salty tear) like a river of crystals.
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That's cool. What about
You are the best
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this poem is the best.
indeed at the summit, my friend. do you think to write a book one day?
I guess I would be the first buyer!
congratulations
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