Vertigo, a missing piece (literature)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Here's something I wrote last month...

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OMG! This is SUCH an AMAZING post! Thank you for sharing! I gave you a vote!!

I like the way you were able to create a feeling of movement and confusion within the piece, especially with regards to the structure of the verses. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for your good comment,

I also am giving you a vote and will start following you, FANTASTIC READ

Why 'a verses' in the final sentence?

that's a typo...thanks for the attention...