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karenmckersie (74) · 7 years ago

Good luck passing your drivers test @bleedspoet !! Such a dramatic poetry though lol! Thanks for sharing , Upped !✌👍😀💙

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

You'll see in Black (2) I passed, leads to a new job and new freedoms. Was 2002 so if I hadn't passed then I'd hope to have passed by now. In fact I let my license expire living in Toronto and had to start the Ontario graduated license from scratch again 7 years later.

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karenmckersie (74) · 7 years ago

Oh , right , my son knows that feeling he has tostart from scratch as well with the graduated licensing , but he owes ICBC a couple grand here in BC so it will be awhile before he even goes in again lol! Best of luck to you !👍👍👍

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sandrina.life (58) · 7 years ago

A man walked into my life and left me without words and energies, but full of feelings and passion, that's why I haven't been inspired to write much lately.
I feel exactly like that: "a poem left dumb in the presence of beauty".

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

It is one of my great struggles, trying to write when everything is swell. I don't like to brag, I realize not everybody wants to hear how happy I am and how wonderful life is, so I sit silenced by my own good fortunes😕

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

Well you shouldn't sit silenced-
Write about happiness when you have it, my dear. It is the happy memory you will need when life is not going swell later.

You write the sad stuff so that you can feel fortunate in the good times.
You write the happy stuff so that you can feel hope that things can change in the sad times.

You shouldn't let your viewership stop you from expressing happiness Eli - That's just fucking stupid, brother.

sandrina.life (58) · 7 years ago

You are the way you are. Life is made by phasis, something wild, sometimes, happy, sometimes lunatic. Accept and you don't need to show or describe any single one. Share what you feel people would appreciate and what would make you feel good to remember.

themadgoat (61) · 7 years ago

It's scary how little of the last 20 years I actually remember.

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Should also note most of the stuff you do remember is pretty fuckin scary😄

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

That's why I wrote so much, my Opa was going through oldtimers and started forgetting stuff and sounding like a broken record. It's amazing how many years and memories seem lost to me because I didn't write them down, names and dates just gone.

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

Young bucks got the world on a chip, that uneasily balances on his shoulder. It is a beautiful chip though.

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Poor kid just wanted to pass his drivers test. Results tommorow😄

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

You have always been melodramatic then?

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

No melodrama to it, I lived in butt fuck nowhere, any job was at least an hour and half by bike. A lot was riding on that test, mainly freedoms, liberty and the pursuit of happiness.

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago (edited)

I see-I see (not melodramatic whatsoever-- cough)- Well how's life these days? Get out to see the Oma?

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Going tomorrow for a county run. Kind of glad to have a few days off.

artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

I know the visit will do her heart good and yours.

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donnadavisart (66) · 7 years ago

What if I spell 'simple' like 'symple' then I won't have to 'smile' ;) I kid because I like. Good stuff.

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

As far as regrettably kitschy lines, I'd say that one took the cake. Realize I read some of these now with a real wtf disgust

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sandrina.life (58) · 7 years ago

^lol

donnadavisart (66) · 7 years ago

Self loathing is the cornerstone of a poets heart, isn't it? :)

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Some things age like wine, others age like cheese. Cheese will always be cheese 😄🧀

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

Also-- just because you are always doing it to me, I think you meant to write

I'm younger than that now...

xP Sorry, you can just see it on my front feed, I was distracted by it. XP

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Fair enough, if you hadn't pointed it out my wife would have. I've never said than in my life.

artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

Now you have two people helping you - what joy!

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

im exssctatichk

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jareen61 (54) · 7 years ago

Where were You ?
When i posted comment
at that moment.
Where were you?
It does not matter
because you are reading my comment now,
For me it is better.