Black (19)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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It comes in waves, it goes, the feeling, the energy which propels us to our greatest feats, sometimes it's good to rest, digest more then you eat. I've been trying to keep up and failing, failing to try hard enough, playing Banjo Tooie with the bear all day in track pants, because some days I just don't give a fuck. What's the use of any of it if you can't relax and enjoy it some days?

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So I hope your well.much love.

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I like your scraggly writing....I lets me know something intimate about you, not to be weird or anything....

It's stream of conscious writing, so the only way to get more intimate is to touch me while reading it😂 Typed words can be reorganized and edited with the reader none the wiser, whereas these writings are given first draft for better or worse.

I love the handwritten word..it's a piece of the author that is uniquely you. Handwriting is so descriptive and uniquely rich, alive with personality- separate from the actual thought transcribed. So ducking cool.

Please, we can say fucking here, it's really one of my favorite verbs/adjectives. The only problem I've found with my handwriting is that people aren't as easily able to translate it to their own language, so I get lots of requests just to type them. I still haven't figured out if it's a cheap kitsch to prop up otherwise poor writing or if it is the way all writing should be presented to give a gateway to the emotion behind the words.

Hahaha...if you've read my C-list post, I too, am a huge fan of the word fuck! It appears that I was auto-corrected! Ugh...hate that.

your poetry always best dear.when i read your poetry my feeling is best and i am sleeping your poetry sweet line come my dream.because you are a genious dear.i appreciate your poetry.your writing always touching my mind..thanks to sharing for your good poetry and nice place..@bleedpoet

Better not let your hubby know a Canadian poet is haunting your dreams😂 Thank you for your kind words @timuann

yeah,friend good opinion of you..thank u dear...@bleedpoet

Wise words, that a few days a month are like that without us caring anything and spend more time at home with our families @bleedpoet

I don't want him to think every day should be vegetating on a couch playing video games, but it is a nice change from the regular workaday grind.

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Absolutely, and furthermore to your point I find that more pornographic images should grace the news, why not a little live feed window on the corner of CNN of cattle fucking.

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I think you're reading to deep into it, I mean I like beef, can't lie, but I didn't mean that... You do have a dark world view, don't you?

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Meep...

You deserve the downtime, don't beat yourself up over videogame days. As you know I am a complete unabler of these things.

Once upon a time I was in love with Our Lady Peace until I watched them live... Man those guys go super cheese on stage. Raine Maida was on stage all sparkly and put a rose in his mouth and started to scale the lights at the side of the stage...he was shirtless under a leather jacket with plethery pants, one set was with him playing with this rose in his mouth intermittently and grinding the side of the stage suggestively. Nobody in the crowd was digging this so there was a super awkwardness in the crowd as we all kinda looked at the spectacle and then to each other.. All I could think Wow...am I not 16 anymore cause I am seeing this shit in a whole new light. Mother Mother was after them and rocked it.

Really dug them circa 4am, supermans dead, naveed... Then the one man army was a step to the spiral downhill. Haven't seen many shows, but don't think I'd have liked Billy Talent as much if I hadn't seen them blow the fucking doors off live. Live shows are important, but sometimes 'artists' can't read a room for shit.

True. A problem I struggle with all the time.

140 pounds? Fucking thin, dude. Eat more!
I used to listen to most of that music 15 years ago. Now....I still keep listening old music.
Take it easy and do only what you enjoy. (Yes, I feel very much captain Obvious with this statement)

I was 18. Now I'm a solid 160-165. I've always consumed all I wanted, my metabolism, bless it, has kept me pretty damn fit. Sometimes you have to forego what you want to do for what you should do.

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It doesn't mean you can't enjoy them, I just prefer music that doesn't involve Chad Kroeger, or Geddy Lee.

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Wow, i am really stunned. Did you autobiographed yourself....Hahaha 6feet 3 inch brown hair blue eyes .... Dude, amazing poem Thank you for sharing