Black (9)

beograd (50) · 7 years ago (edited)

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Gods made up, make him whatever you want, flaunt him to your friends and use him to justify your enemies.
In my own unsophisticated way I was merely stating its bullarky. I like your poem picks up on that, if god was real she wouldn't take herself half as serious as everyone else does.

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beograd (50) · 7 years ago (edited)

artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

Ok, it's done what do you think?https://steemit.com/art/@artwatch/comedy-gold-and-goats-themadgoat

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago (edited)

Needs more chin gash😬 I hope he's alright😬

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

Yeah he didn't get back to me 😐he may be dead by now from rabies. Passed out taking photos of himself. Scars are sexy so I hope he lives.

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago (edited)

Chicken scratches for chicken scratches.

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Obviously this is the winner. Up your game folks😁

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

YAY!

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beograd (50) · 7 years ago (edited)

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artwatch (63) · 7 years ago

No spending on liquor and whores... Well why even have money?

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beograd (50) · 7 years ago (edited)

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manikchandsk (48) · 7 years ago

yes yes @bleedpoet I am a big fan of you. I want to win that steem but I don't understand which comment you be like. plz I want your attention to my comment

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monchhichi23 (56) · 7 years ago

You certainly have a way with words @bleedpoet and they seem to come to you so easily. I truly enjoy reading your poems. It's hard to pick a favorite from these

A moth
smashing angry mystified
into the light
there is a crack

this brought me back to a time, when life was simple, and we would sit on the porch for hours, talking and enjoying time with family and friends, hearing those sounds of the bugs being zapped. That doesn't happen as much these days, everyone is so busy! Thanks for sharing!

bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

Recall campfires where eyes were aglow, far from the reach of a screen or a phone. A lot of people are busy being bored.

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rahulsen (52) · 7 years ago

God has created us, he obeys us and he destroys us.He is Almighty.May be God is black and white. I fulfill all my actions on God, walk in front of life. I call upon my own people to keep God healthy and tell the enemy to ruin. .
Your article is very best @bleedpoet

timuann (59) · 7 years ago

god is everything in the earth.god gives alot of good things in the our life.he created us,he detroyed us.i am really inspired of your poetry.a good writet can to write best poetry.its absolutely amazing gift for me of good day.thank u very much for your good poetry sharing...dear friend..@bleedpoet