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helpingothers (39) · 7 years ago

This is quiet neat, especially the starting lines, "I have to go back to work tomorrow" makes me think of conformity and how society is. So wait, did you write this poem?

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

I wrote all of these poems, every piece on my page is my own, unless otherwise credited, like my wife took the photo, and the poem I read for my 200 milestone. So much of survival now of days is your ability to cope and adjust to cultural norms and expectations, at this point in life I was working to eat to sleep to drink and smoke to eat and work and sleep. I shared a house with crack heads, I was going to university part time to try to get credit for full enrollment, waiting tables on the day shift at a bar called insomnia. I don't want to give anything away, but things go down hill. Thanks for dropping by and checking it out, if you like it I've got plenty of stuff over at bleedpoetry.com including full versions of other books, that work on tablets

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helpingothers (39) · 7 years ago

Yeah no problem, the story behind the work puts everything into perspective, poetry is truly an art, also checked out the website ! looks great.

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