Guest post by @ailindigo: Exquisite corpse #11

in poetry •  6 years ago 

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if you close your eyes, then you disappear, and everything internal feels perennial

perennial like the silence of the ancient nights

the result of that mixture was first of all alive, quick and biting

in the scathing analysis of hidden intentions

Sometimes when it rains it disappears from sight by camouflage

the natural camouflage of what has not yet been

This time I tried making this in a different way and with a different person, can you see what that new way was? But the best of all was that this whole poem evocated on us the same image, can you see it too?

E N J O Y !

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6 years ago by

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