trite love poems - part 1: hey there gorgeous...

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

hey there gorgeous…

            / a ghazal /

colin fry

I couldn’t help but think about swimming in your crystal feel good pool
on this sweltering and sticky afternoon—youknowhatimsayin?

that loose smile is a sunrise, teeth lined up like a choir of joy.
your lips, a luscious curtain, a cushioned stage—youknowwhatimsayin?

there was talk of your bedroom eyes, the soft magnet of a 'come here' gaze.
I want to curl up and dream in their darkness—youknowwhatimsayin?

untamed locks charm and curl in the spirit of a damp, lush rainforest;
a natural allure that blooms from the rain—youknowwhatimsayin?

freckles like sky, a constellation of unlocked glittering plot points;
If you’d let me, I’d love to connect the dots—youknowwhatimsayin?

dessert of milk and caramel, savoring smooth sweetness on the tongue.
one serving just ain’t enough..I crave the taste—youknowhatimsayin?

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