Groggy

in poetry •  9 years ago  (edited)

History both weighs down and uplifts,

The young ones who are awakening.

We pull ourselves up by the fingertips

and glance over the edge of History.

Here we meet reality

With ancient, new eyes

and look around in confusion.

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      ·  9 years ago (edited)

    Nice! :) in the middle sentence there is one "who" too many?

    Last line would sound better without the word "us" in it, in my opinion.

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      ·  8 years ago 

    thanks for the feedback :)

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        ·  8 years ago 

      this is so beautiful (tear-face)

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        ·  8 years ago 

      Thank you for the nice words :) I write to touch people and this comment makes me want to write more poetry.

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