Amazing pace, like an autumnal walk, excellent imagery - I love the way you seize the teenage struggle of coming out of one's shell - great romance too, both modest and extremely colorful. The perfect translation of an ephemeral bound, before love and adulthood happen. It reminds me of how Colette wrote about teenagehood. Brilliant, truly :)
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Thank you for your comment and fine observations. It was the elements you pointed out which make me really happy with this one. Thanks for reading.
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