RE: DAYDREAMS / A Journal of Fiction #29

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DAYDREAMS / A Journal of Fiction #29

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

This part of your day dreaming is catching and I want to catch up with you on this one.

We follow its path down her cheek,
a river that tip-toes on crystals
and lands on the altar.

If I may ask what do you mean by that? Am curious to know. Am following up from the very beginning to end. @beginningtoend. Good work

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      ·  7 years ago 

    The path of her tear (salty tear) like a river of crystals.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      That's cool. What about

      and lands on the altar.

      You are the best

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