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It is the journey of every human being to explore himself and choose the path

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You always have strong memorable last lines.

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I try to always close with impact. :)

Nicely stated! My personal favorite part "resistance leads to getting caught in the undertow" This is AMAZING! Thank You for sharing!

@clayboyn Damn the first two lines are like heaven. A light into the darkness, where we must go alone.
Truth cannot be revealed for it can only be known.yes yes!! We must follow the bright path always even if you are all alone when no one even supports you and you are on your own.

How can you write so well here but get served up in the battleroom? 😁 #thestreets #rapordie #northernstreetsweepers #maplemafia #beavertownbombers #earlshardwearandbicyclerepair

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But I'm not a rapper. :P

Love the message and craft represented in this piece. It flows really well. Can I ask how you were able to justify the text in markdown.

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I just centered it and and wrote to fit the lines that I wanted. Required changing a few things here and there, but it was done manually.

Wow ... that must have been a challenge ... so this is shape poetry too. Kudos. That is not easy to achieve and have it read so well. Color me impressed:)

I love this so much, I did not want it to end. It's just so good....Thanks @clayboyn, for continuing to create post and art that allows the reader to walk away more enlightened, changed and the way you pack the content it gives one some things to think about

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Thanks Ren! Sharing the perspective is all I know. :)

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You have used the word "shan't" therefore you will receive all the Cheezits.
Look at that 67!!!!

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Thanks cat mama!

*Sigh

freedom and love do exist when we let fear go.
A deep emotion put into words. Kudos..

"A light into the darkness, where we must go alone". When we are at crossroads between where we are presently and we are meant to be, the optimum decision lies with interacting with the mind.

They invented hugs to let people know you love them without saying anything.

Beautiful as usual

My favorite line is:

freedom and love do exist when we let fear go.

πŸ‘Œ

Blessings

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I like this types of poetry.... and your poetry is really heart touching ..... you use nice words to express your deep feelings and I also noticed that the picture you used it’s really matched .... great work.

'but freedom and love do exist when we let fear go'.

So freaking nice!!! :)

I just came across hits post because I'm launching a contest for poets and musicians, you should definitely check it out β™₯

https://steemit.com/artonit/@vera.carla/artonit-1-stage-1-calling-all-writers-to-join

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Cool, if I get some time maybe I'll join in. :)

That would be lovely! πŸ€—

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A beautiful poem.

Though it may seem like you're alone at the start, you'll find many others welcoming and encouraging you along the way.

Be well.

I agree - The key to abundance is being without the concept of lack, and freedom and love exist when we let fear go.
Beautiful.
Well worded @clayboyn - Thank you for sharing.

A man's journey although looking careless but a sincere one.. Everyone is responsible for their upliftment as far as freedom could afford...
Love tis poem... Looks like Kendrick lemar rap lines

A beautiful poem.
I like it but I have a lot to learn from you, because your poetry is good, the meaning to be conveyed to the object. great @clayboyn

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Thank you very much for this writing. Very few people post so well..

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Gran talento para escribir. me gusto mucho. Gracias por compartir.

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this great post I appreciate your writing thanks for sharing this freedom.. best of luck.. resteemit..

Wow! This is amazing.. i'll be glaf if you could give your critics on my free versed poems sir.

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that man looking scary

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Can you guess where he is looking at?

Bright and dark. A complicated contradiction. This poem is full of meaning and has a good ritmi. I'm so clever. Thank you @clayboyn.

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Really touching words

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So nice poem. Thanks for sharing such a good poem.

Poetry

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Hello. I liked your post, keep it up. Good luck to you and have a nice day :)

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You’ve got some great photography, I love the dark mood this sets. Love how it draws your eye towards you.

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