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Sometimes (original poetry edit/redux)
7 years ago by clayboyn (70)
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this is a good rework. flows better, simpler. the couplets work really well.
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I like the old one, but it felt really clunky and like it needed an update. I might do some more, we'll see how this goes.
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Sometimes I struggle, the real of myself I need to get off this dusty, dark shelf.
Love this poetry. <3
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I think we all struggle some times. <3
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I know you're right, my dear.
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Sometimes i feel like reading this again and again fantastic poem aye
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Thanks for checking out my work! :)
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Aye mate im following you already
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Love it!! What will be will be!!
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The hair is very wonderful and effective well done, my friend
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