Find me in my land/Original poem [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 76)]

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Find me in my land

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Thoughts,
they come
in a vortex of wind.
My land,
empty,
only
as a shadow,
Sprinkling the salt
all over.
And the silence is long.

My land and I,
the fountains of the abyss
they are open.
And then silence.

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Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit

[Day 76/100]
5/22/18

Reading notes: Beginner

Original by @corderosiete

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Throughout the poem, anguish moves in an endless desert. The tone is pitiful, painful, abysmal. The trimming of words is the same feeling that there is no solution to evil in the short term, it is like a labyrinth with no way out. Good job, brother!

Thank you sister.

Es la realidad de una tierra que se desangra.

Así es. Sangra

Well constructed
Good one cordero

Thank you friend ehisoria