On the edge of the abyss/@prydefoltz

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On the edge of the abyss

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On the edge of the abyss

From the twilight
I wear the color
from the abyss
on my shoulders
and a vertiginous fear
around me.
My tired brow
walk in a thousand ways
oscillating in the most liquid hour.
Sleepwalker,
in the silence of the stars
my tranquility flees.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    very lovely poem I too joined good luck ! :)

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        ·  7 years ago (edited)

      Thank you. You are welcome to Friday Poets and tomorrow, Saturday of Haiku.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Very suggestive images portray the desperation of a very sensitive being struggling with his perceptions of reality that color him with chaos and helplessness and the vision that there are no exits.

        From the twilight
        I wear the color
        from the abyss
        on my shoulders
        and a vertiginous fear
        around me.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Sister, very insightful.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            My tired brow
            walk in a thousand ways
            oscillating in the most liquid hour.
            Sleepwalker,
            in the silence of the stars
            my tranquility flees.

            Superb penning, Cordero:)

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Thanks friend.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Love the imagery, @corderosiete ☻

                I particularly like the first half:

                From the twilight
                I wear the color
                from the abyss
                on my shoulders
                and a vertiginous fear
                around me.

                This shows me the speaker in your poem has been there in the depths of that abyss; he know what is like, and yet he's walking the plank.

                Well penned ☻

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